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Sinister Handed
Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 58

0 posted 2001-09-27 01:57 AM

I whisper in your ear,
to see how you'll reply.
Trace your lips with my finger,
and hear nothing but a sigh.
I sing a song to you,
and you don't make a sound.
I look to your eyes for comfort,
and they're nowhere to be found.
I poke and prod and plead,
yet you don't make a peep.
And still I'm here smiling,
knowing you hear me in your sleep.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-27 02:24 AM

Sinister~
I like everything about this write~
Nice !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-09-27 07:20 AM

This is sweet. But prodding people in their sleep??? Jeesh, can't a person get 40 winks anymore???!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-09-27 12:01 PM

SH~ Sometimes I just die and no amount of poking or prodding will do

But I hear you...my soul revels in every note you sing and every sigh you whisper. This was beautiful, as always...touched my heart and filled it with joy!

Love you

~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2001-09-27 12:21 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh . How sweet, a little bit sixth senceish though isin't it .
Loved it, great poem, thanks very much .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-09-27 02:59 PM

I love this

I'm keeping it too

SIGH

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-09-27 03:16 PM

Silken...James

Sinister Handed
Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 58

7 posted 2001-09-28 12:19 PM

Thank you all for your kind words.
Now if you'll excuse me, I have some prodding to do.

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