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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-09-24 03:12 PM

                            …what’s within….

                            all phenomenon must
                            have a center

                            within

                            there must be a burning,
                            a spark
                            ~life unfolding~

                            yes, all phenomenon

                            ~*~

                            in that which is mine,

                            I find
                            patriotism

                            at the core

                            where once it was
                            but a steady glow,

                            it is now only
                            just
                            beginning to
                            burn

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-09-24 03:16 PM

...And it shall burst forth in full blaze..

Nicely said, D

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-09-24 03:23 PM

and the stars light up the stripes...
very very cool write Deca...
your flame is a welcome warm here today

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-09-24 05:17 PM

Ohh..I have missed your work. Where on earth have you been? geesh. This was wonderful! I always loved your style.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2001-09-24 05:37 PM

A stiffened resolve which lay dormant till needed. Enjoyed

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-24 06:03 PM

DecaFlame~
The smoldering ember sparked to flame~
Love it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-24 08:24 PM

Love this! I enjoy this style of writing as well....very much enjoyed.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-09-27 01:45 AM

Decaflame-
   YES!!  I love this!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

8 posted 2001-09-27 01:58 AM

Decaflame~ I like the progression of this

nurture that spark - may it give you hope.
Very neat form in this.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-09-27 05:32 PM

liked it

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

10 posted 2001-09-27 06:12 PM

Many things are hidden within,until time for them to come to light and grow..very nice write, gentle smile

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-09-28 12:24 PM

Deca~ love this

may your fire burn steady and bright!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

12 posted 2001-09-28 08:58 AM

yes.... very well said... as usual...

I enjoyed!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2001-09-28 09:04 AM

Deca, let the flames burn!! Wonderful........

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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