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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-09-18 03:57 PM

Cold dark silhouette
sharp image at colored sky
twilight within hope.

Charisma
~*TMP*~
18/09/01

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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Minnesota

1 posted 2001-09-18 04:26 PM

Beautiful words....nicely portrayed.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-09-18 04:45 PM

a haunting visual, and sometimes hope is a stark constrast...lovely work here Charisma!

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

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Near golden sunsets

3 posted 2001-09-18 05:16 PM

wonderful image

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-09-18 06:13 PM

Charisma~
A lovely vision painted with your words.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

5 posted 2001-09-18 06:46 PM

Beautiful picture - beautiful words. Beautifully done.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-09-18 07:14 PM

there will always be hope. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

7 posted 2001-09-18 08:24 PM

I must try some of these soon. You do them very well.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-18 09:25 PM

Lovely, lovely, lovely....thank you!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

sonjes
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since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

9 posted 2001-09-19 06:52 AM

so much power packed into such a little haiku! Amazing!!!!!!!

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-09-19 07:39 AM

So much said in so few words Charisma .. very lovely.

Best wishes,
/Kit

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-09-19 11:32 AM

all there is is hope. *s thank you for your views.

~Wynter

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

12 posted 2001-09-19 11:34 AM

enjoy

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

13 posted 2001-09-19 12:22 PM

A haiku is a fast pencil sketch meant to capture a thought or image.I have seen a poem with a hundred words saying or showing nothing.Haiku's are like cordials.Served in small glasses and meant to be sipped slowly and enjoyed.

paladin

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

14 posted 2001-09-19 01:50 PM

Thank you all for your wonderful comments and as Sven said...there will always be hope!

Charisma

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

15 posted 2001-09-19 06:21 PM

A lovely haiku of optimism

Well penned~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2001-09-20 10:21 PM

Charisma-
   This is lovely, my friend.
   Thanks for the smile.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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