Open Poetry #16 |
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...Too Comfortable... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
…Too Comfortable… so when I feel life gets a bit miserable, it doesn’t take much to look around, like I did a few days ago while in a different city, a divergent neighborhood, I noted a diverse approach to what I usually feel comfortable with, I walked a little more guardedly, still smiling, but wary, drove a little slower in strange avenues, where trees met sky, finding that birds and people were quite normal, but I did not know them, even after a day or two when comfortable sat back on my lap it took but a glance to show me I am still a stranger in a foreign place, although in my own state, but no one knows me no one cares, and I get a glimpse of what it must be like to be unwelcome until I need something then my money is as green as yours coins clink as well as yours, packages fill my arms like yours, so I hope when I think I am too comfortable, that is when I hope you see me, as you crutch along or wheel along or still attempt to see with your remaining eye that my smile is only meant to welcome you in your own world so that I can be your console, and we can both become too comfortable for words |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sunshiny one ![]() Wonderfully written with great expressions and images. Take care and hugs, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, tonight this is perfect ![]() ![]() |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Too comfortable for words.." There's a place I'd just LOVE to be right now.. ![]() |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Well ... now I can say "I've experienced two lovely Sunsets tonight" ![]() |
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