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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-09-26 03:20 AM

Bruised hearts awaken in nightime favors,
and simple words breed lonely battles.
Can I see through a drunken haze of covered bliss,
to know that I am bound for deception?
There are those who would have me silenced,
for the pain I shoulder is all too often the same as theirs
and they cannot relate how much I really know them.
Can I see throught a drunken haze of covered bliss
to know that I am bound for deception?
I will not be silent about your seduction
if you keep trying to encloak me with it.
So stop
and know I'm not ever going to be yours.
You tread to hard on my wall, my friend
and I there is nothing but the poison of regret around the corner.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-09-26 07:47 AM

Wow, strong, really strong . I love this kind of poem, the way you discribe the situation is so good . I enjoyed reading it . Thanks a lot .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

2 posted 2001-09-26 08:35 AM

dear temptress
this i enjoyed
poetry should make one think
make one respond
i am not a lover of the cuddly bunny school of writing
poetry is about emotiom
arthur

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2001-09-26 08:52 AM

A sleepless write of warning palpable in it's message.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-09-26 09:24 AM

This is very good.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2001-09-26 10:50 AM

You tread to hard on my wall, my friend
and I there is nothing but the poison of regret around the corner.

Powerful words !!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-09-26 01:31 PM

haven't been reading for some time and this is sooooo powerful.....hurts to be silent doesn't it, especially for a lady poet!

Kathleen

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-09-26 06:43 PM

perhaps one needs to come from behind the drunken cloak. . . and face sobriety. . .

well done. . . powerfully written. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-09-26 07:02 PM

Wow, excellent write. Very strong.
Sandra

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding