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You Were My Life
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You Were My Life |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I often think about, when we first met It's a day that I will never forget I remember, when you wiped away my tears Anytime I was with you, I had no fears Even though, you lived so far away You came to see me every single day There were so many things, we did do So many things about you, I had no clue I always thought, we were meant to be Always together, just you and me I gave you all of the love, I had inside My love for you, I never did try to hide You always meant the world to me I wanted no one else you see © By Sue 9/23/01 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know how this feels, great writing  hugs to you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very nice write, SmartChick...this flows wonderfully...great expression of emotions, too! sp  tried to write a letter |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Poetry from the heart is always a good thing.. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hugs to you, peace as well....it will get better I hope... Greeneyes~ *** |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for the nice replies. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I think we all dwell on our past, much more than we do for our future Nicely done Sue |
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