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‘Tis Sadness
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‘Tis Sadness |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Smoke and mist swirl cross water, ‘tis sadness remaining the sane walker, while the world goes back to war, ‘tis sadness look at insanity’s scar, madmen disrupting the sane, ‘tis madness now nothing will be the same, gazing to the uncertain, there’s darkness, behind a bloody curtain that must be pulled to reveal the madness, it’s our peace that they’ll steal. Gloom |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ProfessorGloom~ Quite a poignant piece of writing. When the curtain calls begin ... may peace do many an encore~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
too much sadness...sometimes 'tis better to just give up |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is sadness, and madness, and you speak of it well. Great form in this one PF, enjoyed. ~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Professor Gloom- Powerful thoughts here. I agree with Marge...may 'peace' be the final act. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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