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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-26 07:43 PM

I Cherish

I medicate myself in thought
and walk the path, my history.
The grounds of which I planted seed,
each imprint mine, artistically.

Sometimes imprisoned, segments lost,
I feel the end of consciousness.
Until I rise in wealth of self,
a process slowly to address

the needs of one, of only me,
as eyes take view of all before;
the rose e'er lasting, shaded pink,
the black-eyed daisies, I adore,

the arbor, over/under spread
with petals opened wide, so pale.
Soaking in the warmth of day
walking through the latticed veil,

I wander 'round, pass by the pond
reflecting thoughts in face I see,
the ripples when I feed the fish,
as they return in greet of me.

The weeping willow newly raised,
bending as the breezes blow
in fragileness, will slowly change
as strength regains, in next years grow.

I feed my mind on natures gifts
and settle on the swing of thoughts,
suspending judgement of my life
revering all my eyes have caught.

No tears to sting, no frowns to face
when mirrored in the glass of time.
Today, I cherish with respect
the path I walk, these thoughts in rhyme.

~Wynter..well at least I gave it a try...*s

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-26-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-26 08:09 PM

this is fantastic, I like the way you write, and in this particular case, who you wrote for

I liked the weeping willow part best

it's shows strength

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-26 08:11 PM

This is...OH So LOVELY!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-27 03:38 AM

Wynter~
Just the loveliest of thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-09-28 09:40 AM

SEA ..I love the way  you write also, thank you for your  kind words...it was  just given to me as a challenge to look  at my  world with open eyes right now...and the willow is newly planted and struggling a bit but I know next year it will be strong as ever.

Enchantress ..thank you for stopping by and leaving a bit of you here.


Marge...always a  ((hug)) for you..thanks..the crispness  is settling in now here...very refreshing  for the spirit.

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-10-02 07:56 PM

Maureen-
   Enjoyed these thoughts very much.
   Beautifully penned.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-10-02 09:34 PM

And not only a lovely try, it is outstanding, and I can see the smile of you in this..very well done...very gentle smile

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2001-10-02 10:06 PM

"I feed my mind on natures gifts
and settle on the swing of thoughts,
suspending judgement of my life
revering all my eyes have caught."

Nature gives so much healing, it is everywhere..this is beautiful. Thank you for reminding me to look.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

8 posted 2001-10-03 12:59 PM

No tears to sting, no frowns to face
when mirrored in the glass of time.
Today, I cherish with respect
the path I walk, these thoughts in rhyme

Oh my goodness sweetPoetFriend, this poem is great I enjoyed it a whole bunch and that which I paste above just well ya know hit my heartstrings tonite gurl...

Hugs2Ualways
*~coco~*

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2001-10-03 09:03 AM

very nice... nicely done indeed...

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2001-10-03 09:18 PM

Lovely, touched my heart.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-10-04 12:13 PM

~Vicky...I am  glad you could enjoy these words *s thank you

Logan..thank you, if you see a smile, send it my way *s

Martie ..thank you for your  kind response, I was reminded to take a look at my surroundings and see what my eyes have been  missing.

*~coco~* ..nice to see you, it's always a pleasure to read your comments, thank you. and hugss back *s

Cpat...glad you liked *s

walker...it's nice to touch someone's heart every now and then *s  thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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