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Open Poetry #16

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Slashed soul
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 86
England

0 posted 2001-09-26 03:22 PM

A lady she surely be
A lady just for me
with her words
she reavels
her soul

With a passion she writes
which in turn ignites
my fireless nights alone

Never see her face
can not hold her hand
all I know of this lady
she's not from this land

She smiles, as she reads
and governs my scripts
She alters and tweaks the
risky bits

I ponder and ponder
and I smile too
cause I know you know
I wrote about you.....

[This message has been edited by Slashed soul (edited 09-26-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-09-26 03:26 PM

(smiling) Yes... nicely done...

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-09-26 03:29 PM

How clever...and charming! Well done!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-09-26 06:02 PM

Enjoyed this...

*Chuckles*

~Tier

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