Open Poetry #16 |
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Very Important |
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Nikolette Sadness![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
there is a very sad story behind this poem, it's about a boy whose parents divorced when he was very young, more then ten years later he is still effected by it, his mother did not provide him with what he needed and did not want him around, he can't admit it, but he is very emotionally distraught, he was my best friend, but now he's gone... ~Smile for the Picture~ you smile for the picture to hide it all away you smile in the pictures to hide your pain youre just a little boy trapped inside this man a sad little boy hiding what he can there is someone in that picture that isn't really you there's someone there i never knew your afraid to show your sorrow or even face your truth remembering the pains of a tarnished youth when you want to come back i'll be here for you but i hope you come back as the one i knew Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. [This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very touching..... Kathleen |
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Nikolette Sadness![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thanx rose...i'm glad you liked it i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes they say that children of divorce are affected emotionally in many ways and for many years...some experience problems with relationships and commitment...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so sad. Hugs to you, and him. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Others stain a life of pain for those that must remain. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
For most don't even know who they are, for without some help they carry a scar. They carry with them all the blame, and go through their lives feeling that shame! Well done indeed, and yes, children are the forgotten victims more often than not in divorce, and you said it well. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very sad....some things take a long time to fully deal with. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's amazing how we can hide. . . and never be seen. . . from the heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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