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Open Poetry #16

You burn it with passion

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-11-14 07:46 PM

I watch as you sleep
so close you are to me
yet so far away
Everytime I try to reach your
unreachable shore
I succumb to this vagueness
without hope
I offer love
but you burn it
with passion
I start all over from
the other side of my world
I try to tell you
I love you
my way
by giving you love
kissing you
deep and soft
like none before
But I fail to tell you
I love you
One night you
will look into my eyes
at the right moment
when our souls are connected
and feel my love
no need for words
Just let it flow
into our hearts
our love

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

1 posted 2001-11-14 08:26 PM

but opening the mouth and saying it also counts for a lot. however, let not words stand alone... for then they count not at all, and are in fact quite meaningless, even damaging.

Digitalfaith21
New Member

since 2001-11-16

Posts 3
Aurora, IL

2 posted 2001-11-16 03:35 PM

Wow I really liked this one...so deep and so true...I think everyone can relate to this feeling atleast once in their life...

Jennifer

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-11-16 11:55 PM

I offer love
but you burn it
with passion

Very cool way to put it, walker.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-20 04:19 AM

*sigh* beautiful!

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