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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-11-13 10:16 AM


This has been moved to Open Poetry 17.




On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)



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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2001-11-13 11:32 AM


I like this,
the self-searching aspect of it particularly,
making yourself almost a mirror in
self-evaluation.
Although if I did it it would be with
a different twist, not being as
sweet and gentle as your spirit.

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-11-13 11:37 AM


sometimes we see best when we take that long look in the mirror.  Thank you prof. as always for stopping in and offering your kind words.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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