Open Poetry #16 |
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expected solace |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
they walk like this down the aisle s s i by i d d e e hands in prayer and seeking solace I can feel their sadness, see it in their eyes, it's as if it would only take an angels' touch to let the feeling flow they arrive like this at the altar s s i by i d d e e hands open, ready to receive the gifts they accept the gifts of life body and blood bread and wine the ritual repeated the words spoken they return like this to their lives s s i by i d d e e hands closed kneeling lost in thought and yet, they are still where they were, still seeking solace, and I wonder is solace offered when it is expected? ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: Those lines make you think.... Well written, Sven. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Being a practicing Catholic I often wonder why sometimes I'm able to really experience the peace of the bread and the wine. And sometimes I can't. It's part of our humanity, we must stay focus, but they are many distractions in life. At times I'm that person you've described. Great spiritual question here. Thanks. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
is solace offered when it is expected? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sven! Now you KNOW how much I love this!! ![]() AND the presentation! Fantastic! Love it...love it ...love it! Tis a keeper. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
![]() This is wonderful, Beautiful Heart! ![]() Great question...excellent leading up to it! ![]() Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRILLIANT!!!!This poem is a masterpiece, Sven. I absolutely love it. You are amazing. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The question of the day, Sven. "is solace offered when it is expected?" Hopefully it is offered when it is truly needed. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, never have I seen it put quite that way. Great job, sure makes you think a lot. And the presentation was very cool. Sandra |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely, Sven, a different slice of you here. Good question, too, I wish I knew the answer. Seems sometime we have to comfort ourselves. Corinne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This reminded me of my wedding day....very nice Kathleen |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) BRAVO!!! STANDING OVATION!!! WONDERFUL POEM!!! It too saddens me to see those who seek solace and feel troubled yet if they have touched His lips. (big hugggssssss) My heart goes out to all and believe with all my heart as long as we reach our love to him earnestly and lovingly, we will seek His blessings! (smiles) You are always so amazing, we all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
s s i by i d d e e you asked a good question, Sven..but i was very taken up with the format above.. Gosh, sven, you are so clever! ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a great spiritual quest Sven, if only one could find the answers....excellently presented Sven. ![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The ritual...is not the key. Very thoughtful piece, Sven. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Solace?!! Sometimes we are too unreachable to get that. Wonderful write my friend. And I liked the unique way you represented it. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It is there, we need only ask! Don't tell me my soul brother is doubting that? I hope not!!! Hon this was intriguing and the unexpected format enchanting.. Isis |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It is there, we need only ask! Don't tell me my soul brother is doubting that? I hope not!!! Hon this was intriguing and the unexpected format enchanting.. Isis |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Truly unique you are my poet friend. I am intrigued with the question...as I believe it must already be present within us..just awakened by something more powerful than ourselves sometimes...to expect though is to be disappointed..to have faith is another thing altogether..You are wonderful in this...and I know that. Sincerely, Regina |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
John, excellent presentation, powerful questions you ask...beautiful message behind the words...your writing always makes me THINK...this is no exception! take care. amy ![]() "I could kiss you in |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . it's amazing how some can come seeking solace, find it, and yet. . . still be sad and hurting. . . it's as if the solace they were seeking did not exist for them. . . Regina spoke of faith. . . and that's a part of it. . . but, it also must come from us. . . we must understand that when solace comes, it's from a heart of love. . . thank you all again. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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