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Niksta
New Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 6
Australia

0 posted 2001-11-12 10:14 PM

Today I woke up feeling sad,
Like something was not right.
I know just why and how I feel,
But my heart is locked up tight.

I want to tell you how I feel,
And be with you once more.
But I can not get the words out right,
When I walk in through your door.

I think about you all the time,
I want to hold your hand.
I know I need to tell you this,
But it's more than I can stand.

I need you near me,
I want you to love me,
But I know that time will tell.
I just wish I could spit it out,
And break our icy shell.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-11-12 10:18 PM

Hi! Welcome to Passions! I like your poem. I think you should tell him what you're feeling because I bet he is feeling the same exact way for you and he's waiting on you to break the ice.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-12 10:28 PM

Hi,welcome to Passions.I agree with Rose Petal.I think you should tell him.Atleast you will have given your heart truth and even if he doesn't reciprocate you will be able to move on in time.Great write.
Peaches

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-11-12 11:36 PM

HI--WELCOME--go for it....dont stand in the waters of doubt, it will lead to regret....I hope this works for you...nice words...

Greeneyes~

****

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-12-2001).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-11-12 11:46 PM

Nice to meet you, Niksta. As for the guy,
when you have no doubt, shout it out.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-13 03:04 PM

Just sent this poem to them and it will do the talking for you. Absolutely beautiful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sonya
New Member

since 2001-11-13

Posts 9
Mesa, Arizona

6 posted 2001-11-13 03:32 PM

This poem is beautiful, and I can totally identify with it -Been there myself- "Seize the Day" and tell him! One of the worst things in life are the What If's-
Sonya

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

7 posted 2001-11-13 04:10 PM

Welcome to this family of poets!
Great poem!
I think you should let your feelings be heard.

Do or die!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2001-11-13 05:43 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Niksta, I know just how you feel! Follow RosePetal's advice, for if you tell him how much you love him, I bet he too dreams ever so much of breaking the ice and embracing you and sharing with you all his heart desires! (sigh) Let him know how you feel, for I am sure he will be so happy to hear what your loving heart says and give you all you can ever dream of! (smiles) Follow your sweet heart, friend, and you will find true happiness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you, sweet friend, and all have faith in you! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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