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Forever Hides Behind A Veil Of Love
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Forever Hides Behind A Veil Of Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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It's five O'clock in the morning the first night has slipped away and out there on the silent street I keep searchin for your face. the curtains on this lone window dribble whispers through the place as I sit here thinkin bout you cause we said good-bye today. Chorus: And forever hides behind a veil of love You get to see it if you're strong enough We didn't find a place there made for us where forever hides behind a veil of love. In two more hours I leave this room and fade into the human race I might see you around sometime but it'll never be the same And I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease the pain but our time ran out and we both knew it was time to make a change. Chorus: Cause forever hides behind a veil of love you get to see it if you're strong enough We didn't find a place there made for us Where forever hides behind a veil of love. Bridge: I know someday I'll be thinking bout the times we had back when and wish we'd found out soon enough where beginnings never end. Rep Chorus. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
No one sings the blues like you do, Eric! I mean that true! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I sure enjoyed these lyrics, Eric, and I created my own melody for it that seemed to underscore the mood I felt while reading. And I'm still enjoying Jessie's Day.  Thanks for sharing these great lyrics and music. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love the blues, ethome!! Much enjoyed this one. All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And forever hides behind a veil of love You get to see it if you're strong enough We didn't find a place there made for us where forever hides behind a veil of love. In two more hours I leave this room and fade into the human race I might see you around sometime but it'll never be the same And I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease the pain but our time ran out and we both knew it was time to make a change. ============================ Ebabers...you make me wish I could sing... where are me girlies to sing back up... Sen? Dor? Martie? bring those tambourines... Erics singing the blues and ya know we cant stay away Yer so cool my poet pal  ~~~~~~ Well its 3 am baby... and I'm thinking I made a mistake You've only been gone a few hours and it's already more than I can take I know that we can get it right Please dont give up on this just yet Baby if I lose you now... I'll drown in these tears of regret. Pull back the veil on forever Let the love we once knew light up this place Let's see if we can get it right this time C'mon baby ...wrap me in your rhyme's embrace  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. In the sunlight, in the shadows ... No ... I'll never stop looking for you. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Poetical, musical,and lovely. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh how very sad, Eric. Shoot you are always able to bring tears to my eyes. Why does there have to be goodbyes. **hugs** This is not just a song...it touched my heart.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ET, my friend, this is one amazing write... I can't choose the parts that I liked the most, for I think I liked the whole and all of this one... Regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ 'the curtains on this lone window dribble whispers through the place' This is just marvelously written, my friend~ I love your 'dribbles' ...  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
would love to hear the melody of this. really great. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really touches on a heartache ethome...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a slow song...almost a ballad.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
ethome What a heartfelt piece of writing you have penned here, so very beautiful. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a sad song sweet poet man...sigh...make me smile now ok? |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Nice one ET, sweet lyrics much enjoyed, they inspire some deep blues my friend. Regards, Olias. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Back up there with Jessie's Day. |
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