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Open Poetry #16

Shadowed Moon (revised)

Tara Simms Hall
Member

since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

0 posted 2001-11-12 10:37 AM

Shadowed Moon

We danced under shadowed moon
the song of the wild our only music
I swayed in your arms and breathed your soul
drawing you into me
deeper...
and deeper still with every breath

Silver ripples played on the sea
illuminating the magic of the moment
I was mesmerized by the sheer beauty of the scene
held captive in a dream I prayed would never end

Twilight spilled in pools at our feet
wrapping her midnight cloak around us
and still we danced
Until we melted into the shadows,
together
At one with each other,
at one with the night

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-11-12 11:13 AM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Tara! You are always soooooooo romantic, I love it! (smiles) May your loving heart forever be captured in this lovely romantic dream! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2001-11-12 12:05 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh .... how sweet, what a nice poem . Truely lovely .
YOu have my gratitude .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-12 08:53 PM

Tara, this poem is very visual...soft..
romantic...this poem brought serenity to me.
Such a relaxing atmosphere...Nicely written.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-12 10:20 PM

great job here Tara. . . you made the images come alive. . . and showed us those shadows. . .

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