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Tara Simms Hall
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0 posted 2001-11-12 10:37 AM



Shadowed Moon

We danced under shadowed moon
the song of the wild our only music
I swayed in your arms and breathed your soul
drawing you into me
deeper...
and deeper still with every breath

Silver ripples played on the sea
illuminating the magic of the moment
I was mesmerized by the sheer beauty of the scene
held captive in a dream I prayed would never end

Twilight spilled in pools at our feet
wrapping her midnight cloak around us
and still we danced
Until we melted into the shadows,
together
At one with each other,
at one with the night

© Copyright 2001 Tara Simms Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-12 11:13 AM


(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Tara! You are always soooooooo romantic, I love it! (smiles) May your loving heart forever be captured in this lovely romantic dream! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-12 12:05 PM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhh .... how sweet, what a nice poem . Truely lovely .
YOu have my gratitude .
L.of.L. Tom .

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3 posted 2001-11-12 08:53 PM


Tara,  this poem is very visual...soft..
romantic...this poem brought serenity to me.
Such a relaxing atmosphere...Nicely written.

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4 posted 2001-11-12 10:20 PM


great job here Tara. . . you made the images come alive. . . and showed us those shadows. . .



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