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My open arms await the breeze of your love
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My open arms await the breeze of your love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The most gentle of breezes blow the words of love into my heart from the white peaks of another land. Standing tall, I allow these soft touches to caress me. My ever wondering mind absorbing all that is given. Will there ever be a day that this breath of life ends? Can my soul absorb the pain of that moment in time? Hear me, never let the breeze become still or away. Continue to give my heart a touch of your love’s wind. Which way to the stars above, to the shimmering light? Can a heart’s soul journey far into the regions unknown? My every moment is consumed by desire as I wait. Surely I must know we can, my dreams tell me of this Give me your heart, your being, let me comfort you. Allow my truth to touch your inner self, to guide you. Let me into your mind as we share perfect dreams. Wash my soul with your love beneath crystal falls. I wait now for a moment when the breeze touches me. My senses feel is only a mere moment of time till. I open my arms, as sails to collect this caress. I open my heart as only you know I ever will. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* to start the day by reading the romance you write makes the day somehow go much better. You write from a heart that leaves me in awe and fills me with hope that there are men like you in this world where real love is seldom felt anymore. Magnificent writing, my friend.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
*SIGH* Beautifully romantic. A very nice read at the begining of the day. Although, it makes me want to go home to hubby. *giggle* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...we know there is one...just clone me. go ahead.... a freebie..... If this is what will make your morning a pleasure.... I will burn the midnight oil to make it available to you... Thanx lady... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Abigaile....thank you....do I need to call a cab for your trip home? LOL.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM...in short words..your style... Glad did, thanx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyable read Magnus....after yet another stress filled day. *trying to smile* ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Nancy...hope you find some soothing words to take the stress away. I abhor days like that...Far too many of them I have endured... |
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