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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Rusty By: Noah Eaton 11/11/01 I didn’t hear you call You left me cloistered in my cell I bellowed out my trill But I didn’t hear the church bells I cried myself to sleep Feeling I would never be able to play happily I sit alone in the corner Felt I was left stale to die in misery I have so much to give I have so much to share But I feel rusty… And I can’t think I can’t feel I can’t sleep When you don’t love me And I can’t breathe I can’t laugh I can’t glee When you don’t love me I try to talk with my friends Like I’m waiting for an ambulance in an emergency I don’t hear your signal I feel you’ve lost all faith in me I claim to convince myself That you may come to talk it over with me But you are not there when I need you I feel all my heartstrings shattering I have so much to give I have so much to share But I feel rusty… And I can’t think I can’t feel I can’t sleep When you don’t love me And I can’t breathe I can’t laugh I can’t glee When you don’t love me I don’t feel like anyone’s blessing Maybe I should never speak up again The glass is half full to me But it feels contaminated And I can’t think I can’t feel I can’t sleep When you don’t love me And I can’t breathe I can’t laugh I can’t glee When you don’t love me I must be rusty to you… Rusty… Rusty… |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
unconditional there is One loves you always lubing rusty ways |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Oh my god Noah ... This is great; I loved reading it . L.of.L. Tom . 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, I so relate to this sad song, I feel rusty too. Good poem. Smile sweet one, she is coming soon.. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes I feel like the world has stopped if my girlfriend doesn't call or I can't get in touch with her but that's when I have time to go to the beach or go hiking...hang out with other friends...or just get away time for myself...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*Tender Hugs* to you, No'ah... love you! ~Tier |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
sad, but well expressed. have faith, Noah, you may not get what you WANT, but God has a way of seeing that we most assuredly get what we NEED - hang in there, man, it DOES get better  -Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write Noah! Hang in there sweetie! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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