Open Poetry #16 |
The Scale |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Scale Today I am a butterfly And flutter high to try my wings I fly into a colored sky To search the view of dreamers things My breakfast is flowers nectar Blooming in amongst the trees and If lucky, I find a sector Of lady butterflies to please It is a world light and airy Full of wonder and fantasies A world of phantoms and fairies With places full of ecstasy It is the other side my scale On the left of the balance pole It is a place I post my bail To equalize and rest my soul A positive for negative With just enough to let me live |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
'A positive for negative With just enough to let me live' ............ A lesson in these words Seymour excellent |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If lucky, I find a sector Of lady butterflies to please It is a world light and airy Full of wonder and fantasies A world of phantoms and fairies With places full of ecstasy It is the other side my scale On the left of the balance pole It is a place I post my bail To equalize and rest my soul A positive for negative With just enough to let me live ======================================= me and the ladies await your fly-bys *winkiewinkie* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let me metamorphose, so I might fill your sky with each and every color, to please your astute eye a bit of gold, touch of blue, iridescent green a little bit of butterfly, but never touch Moth Queen... |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
soft they flutter by dreamy silken butterfly silent passing high |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A grand monarch you are... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautiful!!! love it! Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I will join all these other ladies and be one of your butterflies. Have a great day, my friend. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfectly dreamy poem. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Watch out for all those lady butterflies... they are gonna come swarming after you now.. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Not a bad way to pay off your debts. I always enjoy reading your flights of fancy. Peace. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How wonderful, to live in the world of butterflies. And I love the imagery of you being a macho little male butterfly pleasing all the ladies! You monarch, you! Cor |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Seymour! Your beautiful words will have all the sweet lady butterflies filling your hearts rose in the garden of your inspirations! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I wrote this for you a long time ago. It seemed, again, to be an appropriate response! (((HUGS))) On Gossamer On gossamer your soul soars high As gentle as a butterfly Adrift upon the springtime breeze Wings flutter with such grace and ease. In meadow fair or hill or glen You drift aloft and bless again With ev’ry word from your pen wrought Those walls it seems have only taught A little higher, friend, to fly There is no limit to the sky To any door you hold the key To open it poetic’ly Across the chasm wide you sail Portraying truth, you never fail On gossamer fly ever high As gentle as that butterfly. 12/99 [This message has been edited by Denise (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
seems to me by the line forming ... that you are and have always been ... the BIG LUNA around here *L* Why even Randy cant keep up Denise that poem is PERFECT and lovely. See how much we ALL love you Stinky Now...tell me again how you cant fly?? *winkiewinkie* |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love the ending, Seymour. Wonderful work! All writing comes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"A positive for negative With just enough to let me live" What an awesome ending! You are so well balanced, Seymour. It always shines through in your poetry. |
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