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Open Poetry #16

A Honest Note

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-12 01:16 AM

Said something silly,
I picked on you again.
I heard your lovely voice,
I loved to see you smile.
And you always seemed so fine,
With your bright eyes.
Looking in your eyes,
I saw a reflection of my own.
Did you know,
I admired you, your friendliness.
And whatever I asked you,
You always gave me a honest note.
Ever so innocent,
You got a beauty you knew not.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-11-12 12:36 PM

Fantastic poem; Glad to have read it .
Thanks . L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2001-11-12 04:39 PM

hello there! Thanks for replying my poem. Nice to meet you. I'm quite new to here.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

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