Open Poetry #16 |
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A Song For You |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
A song for you Played sweetly In notes of serenity Lifting mind before spirit Rustling leaves my cymbals Distant thunder the drums Lightning silver flash Waking your beautiful eyes Love sung From life's guitar Slender neck and body Strumming heart chords softly Jingle jangle memories played Out loud Joyous thoughts my tambourine Living in graceful tempos Your wispy silken back My piano Tracing by ear Fingers caressing remembered keys Lips gently press lips Ringing bells Heard many times Love now Chiming so crystal clear |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem plays so softly on my heart, Sir Robert. The music of your words are beautiful and had me hearing their tender notes. Very well done. ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Damn, that Startime comes up with all the best responses. Let me just echo her!!!! Seriously, this is a beautiful melody for a loved one. It sings a lovely song. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Such tender orchestrations strum from your loving heart in this timeless lovely classic! (smiles) May your serenade forever touch your loves heart! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sir Robert, Enough of this and I might have to consider myself a fan! So could you lighten up? ![]() |
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