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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-11 09:36 PM


A song for you
Played sweetly
In notes of serenity
Lifting mind before spirit

Rustling leaves my cymbals
Distant thunder the drums
Lightning silver flash
Waking your beautiful eyes

Love sung
From life's guitar
Slender neck and body
Strumming heart chords softly

Jingle jangle memories played
Out loud
Joyous thoughts my tambourine
Living in graceful tempos

Your wispy silken back
My piano
Tracing by ear
Fingers caressing remembered keys

Lips gently press lips
Ringing bells
Heard many times
Love now

Chiming so crystal clear



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-11 09:41 PM


*sigh* this poem plays so softly on my heart, Sir Robert. The music of your words are beautiful and had me hearing their tender notes. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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2 posted 2001-11-11 09:47 PM


Damn, that Startime comes up with all the best responses. Let me just echo her!!!! Seriously, this is a beautiful melody for a loved one. It sings a lovely song.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-11-11 10:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Such tender orchestrations strum from your loving heart in this timeless lovely classic! (smiles) May your serenade forever touch your loves heart! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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4 posted 2001-11-12 12:11 PM


Sir Robert,
Enough of this and I might have to consider myself a fan! So could you lighten up?  

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