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Open Poetry #16
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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-11 07:05 PM

Up a poet tree
Many falls coming swiftly
Dropping lines like leaves
Words blowing in wind
© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-11 07:09 PM



BRAVO!!! What a beautiful poem about inspiration and magic we share to one another through words! (smiles) Your beautiful words always inspire us all, sweet brother! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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2 posted 2001-11-11 07:17 PM

Your words blow gently upon the breeze bringing beauty and refreshment with each poem you pen. Well done, Sir Robert. Another gem of yours. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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3 posted 2001-11-11 08:04 PM

Love the play on words, Robert. Refreshing, unique.
The Rusty Knight
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4 posted 2001-11-11 08:22 PM

You almost landed on a pun *S*

Dan

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5 posted 2001-11-11 09:37 PM

Robert
This was wonderful and so cleverly written.
Take care......Sue

Suetang
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6 posted 2001-11-12 12:12 PM

Sir Robert,
Are short poems easier or harder? I can't tell...'cause they're both looking pretty good.  
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