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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-11-11 08:52 AM

Forever We Sate

Its in the knowing
We cannot be
In taking fantasy
Where we can see

Its in the touching
Love embraces
We take fantasy
Into empty spaces

For each are filling
Longing fantasy
I can feel you
Can you feel me

My mind seeking
Taking a chance
Sensuous words
Makes heart dance

The body language
Forever one sates
Are we lovers
Or eternal mates

Together entwined
We always will be
Living the real
Sharing in fantasy

Of coming together
In night and day
The understanding
Each word we say

Each of us finding
Heart and bond
Sensuous touch
We do go beyond

Loving each other
Each seek more
We travel eternal
Both singing encore

Roll me in clover
Flow my streams
Caress me forever
In sating all dreams

Hope© 2001

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-11 09:55 AM

Fantasy serves a delicious purpose, it can mingle with reality and bring you in touch with yourself and sometimes you know, it's just glorious, a wonderful feeling. Yes, it does feel sated and I loved your choice of words in this one.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-11-11 10:08 AM

(sigh) Oh Hope, this is soooooooo romantic! (sigh) May you forever touch each others hearts with true love! (smiles) You are sooooo sweet, dearest friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2001-11-11 10:16 AM

Thanks kay for your kind remarks
yes fantasy will always create the delicious sparks
Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2001-11-11 10:17 AM

Thank you sweet Noah , you always touch my heart
with your kind replies
Hope

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-11-12 06:30 AM

this is so beautiful. Full of love, caring, and sharing. wonderful job

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2001-11-12 07:04 AM

Sharing the reality and the fantasy.

Yes...
It doesn't get much better than that!

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 11-12-2001).]

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

7 posted 2001-11-12 07:31 AM

reading this poem
a gentle drifting delight
in your special heart

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

8 posted 2001-11-12 08:55 AM

This is a beautiful poem...also, I really love your knitted designs, on your website! I do some crocheting and have some patterns on my site, but I haven't done many sweaters and the ones I've done don't use graphed or crocheted-in designs...I kind of prefer "hard crochet," meaning sturdy stuff and 3-D constructions.

Anyway...back to poetry, here...I'll have to read more of your poetry!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-11-12 04:19 PM

love can be
felt by two
as blood flows
words flow too.

Hope, excellent romantic words...sends a
clear message...you write beautifully,
as usual...

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