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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-11-10 11:09 PM


You can buy me everything
That my heart so desires
But, you don't give me anything
That my heart always requires

To be so in love with you
While you neglect my needs
Makes it hard to give so true
The love I feel will recede

If in your heart you'll let me in
The love I have, you will see
Is a love that only you can win
If only you will come to me

I'll always take your loneliness
And make you feel happy inside
Your money can't buy happiness
But in your heart I can reside

© By Sue 11-10-01


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
1 posted 2001-11-11 12:44 PM


SmartChick,
What a wonderful offer!   He better wisen up.

wornways
Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204
CA, USA
2 posted 2001-11-11 01:57 AM


i'm with lary, hope he wisens up. it'll really be a bummer for you both if he doesn't wisen up. but it seems apparent it'll be 100 times the bummer for him.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-11-11 07:32 AM


If in your heart you'll let me in
The love I have, you will see

this and your last  verse..so beautiful and I believe the same..if only they openp and let us in...nice poem *s

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2001-11-11 09:56 AM


Money can never buy happiness, this is GREAT!!! best wishes, and peace to you...


Greeneyes~


****


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-11-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-11-11 10:28 AM




(big hugggssssss) I hope he can feel the love in your beautiful heart, and the happiness that resides within! (sigh) You are such a beautiful person and deserve the most beautiful love your heart can ever dream of! (sigh) May all your dreams come true and happiness eternally fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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