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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-11-10 06:28 PM






Like No Other
AMK
11/10/01

Everyone has a defining moment in their life
That lets them know they've fallen in love
Some recognize it sooner than others
Perhaps it's how they smile at you
Or how they hang on your every word with vivid interest
No matter how you know, you just know

I use to walk this life
Alone on the inside, surrounded by happiness on the outside
The shadows I thought at one time
Would consume me
Love was something I never thought
Would honestly find a way into my heart

Then you came into my life
In my darkest hour
You appeared with your radiant light
Sweet Angel of mine
As though you descended from the Heavens
Our paths crossed and linked, that was my defining moment

At first I thought you were a dream
You were just too good to be true
I looked for flaws or signs of something wrong
While searching for a reason to back out
I fell deep into love with you
Like no other love I've ever felt

You light up my soul
Making my life a bright safe haven
My arms ache to hold you late at night
The distance for now seperates us
Our love though will break all barriers
No time nor distance can change what we share

You tell me that I am the love of your life
That you want to spend forever with me
I respond in kind by saying to you
That I love you today and always
There will never come a day
That I will tell you goodbye

Our unison is bounded by Destiny and Fate
The hands of time may still march on
But our love is as timeless as sands on the shore
Your face and voice linger with me constantly
Every dream that I have
Has you laced somewhere in it

I need you like the air that I breathe
No matter the raging storm going on outside
You and I are safe
Forever locked in this passionate love
Your kisses to me
Are like rain to a barren desert

I wait in sweet anticipation
To the next time I will hear your beautiful voice
The Angels will sing to me once more
I have so much love in this heart to give
Like no other you have captured my heart
It is yours forever, till the end of Time




"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-10 06:29 PM


Absolutely beautiful. A unique love like no other. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-10 06:34 PM


(sigh) Oh Amy, this is sooooooooo beautiful and romantic! (sigh) Your golden heart shines with such a beautiful love like no other, and his heart will forever be yours! (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet Amy, you are such a sweet romantic! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Jamie
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3 posted 2001-11-10 08:05 PM



Sven
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4 posted 2001-11-10 08:37 PM


in a word. . .

*sigh*. . .



----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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5 posted 2001-11-10 10:21 PM


Oh Amy,

This is a joy to read about, my friend.  I love seeing you so happy and full of hope.  Your heart is pure, true, and just.  May the two of you be happy together always.  I have to say, I've always admired your work since I first joined Passions.  It's so good to have you back with us again.  

Take care.  ((HUGS))

LW

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-11-10 10:22 PM


Beautiful Amy, just beautiful. Both your words, and the meaning behind them. You are both lucky indeed to have found each other. A soulmate is not an easy thing to find, but it certainly seems as though you have found yours. I wish you many, many years of happiness together  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-11-10 10:28 PM


Amy, my goodness you just wrote such beautiful expression of devoted and committed love that I've ever read...
Absolutely a jewel of a poem and I'm gonna keep this one in my library for many more reads sweetie...
And by the way, my heart hugz ya sweetie for this fabulous newsUshare with us2day...
Muaah on cheekz2u
*~coco~*

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