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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-11-10 12:40 PM


I
who love you
give
My life to you

I
gave you
strength to weather storms
wisdom to seek truth
Hope to find peace
love to find yourself

I
want you
to have
Joy everlasting
Love eternal
Comfort
The Earth before you

I
want you
to  know I
miss you
cry for you
care

I
will
hold you
console you
protect you
die for you



© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-10 12:47 PM


sounds like it was written for a Goddess...

must be so. Quite lovely, Mag.

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2 posted 2001-11-10 01:05 AM


Breathtaking and heartfelt
Peaches

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3 posted 2001-11-10 02:37 AM


hey mister...those are melting words.... loved this  
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4 posted 2001-11-10 03:28 AM


Definitely words meant to be together...
see how they pour into the single tear.
   *sigh*
Another great one Magnus!!

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5 posted 2001-11-10 12:45 PM


WOW....this is soul touched, and penned....lovely, lovely thoughts....
Greeneyes~


****


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-10-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-11-10 12:47 PM


No stronger love exists than this.

Corinne

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7 posted 2001-11-10 01:10 PM


Magnus,

     So tender and heartfelt... just lovely  


Hugs,
Tara

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8 posted 2001-11-10 02:21 PM


*sigh*  BREATHTAKING!!!  *sigh*
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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9 posted 2001-11-10 02:26 PM




(big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) Oh Magnus, your loving heart has the most beautiful love a woman could ever ask for; faithfulness. Your beautiful heart will always be faithful to her, just as she will always love you! (sigh) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2001-11-10 03:14 PM


Karen....YES...a goddess....of the most
imaginable beauty...

Magnus
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11 posted 2001-11-10 03:15 PM


Peaches...I am pleased that I can give you
words to read that are pleasurable to your
eyes and heart.

Magnus
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12 posted 2001-11-10 03:17 PM


Sue...sorry for the puddles....glad you
enjoyed....thanx

Magnus
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13 posted 2001-11-10 03:18 PM


CT...very coincidental with the words pouring
into the tear...but appropriate...thanx..

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14 posted 2001-11-10 03:19 PM


Greeneyes...are they green?  YES...soul
penned words can carry a lot of power..
easy to do when you truly feel them.

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15 posted 2001-11-10 03:20 PM


Thanx Corinne...pleased to please...I do
enjoy that.  

Magnus
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16 posted 2001-11-10 03:21 PM


Thanx Tara...I was in the zone...felt good.
Magnus
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17 posted 2001-11-10 03:22 PM


Nancy....what is there left for me to say
to someone who comments so beautifully to my
every written word....Huh?

Magnus
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18 posted 2001-11-10 03:23 PM


Thanx Noah...she is a beautiful lady....and
BTW...I am the lucky one...

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19 posted 2001-11-10 06:26 PM


*sigh* a very lucky lady indeed. Romance seems to fill your heart and soul, my friend. This is beautiful.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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20 posted 2001-11-10 07:03 PM


Magnus; This is a little different in the way you write poetry, but it is so lovely, tender, and filled with compassion for the one you love.  Beautiful work.  Wanda
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21 posted 2001-11-10 10:57 PM


What can I say. Beautiful thoughts, beautiful feelings. I hope she sees this.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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22 posted 2001-11-10 11:00 PM


This is very good. A heartfelt poem. Thank you for posting.
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