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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-10 12:40 PM

I
who love you
give
My life to you

I
gave you
strength to weather storms
wisdom to seek truth
Hope to find peace
love to find yourself

I
want you
to have
Joy everlasting
Love eternal
Comfort
The Earth before you

I
want you
to know I
miss you
cry for you
care

I
will
hold you
console you
protect you
die for you

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-11-10 12:47 PM

sounds like it was written for a Goddess...

must be so. Quite lovely, Mag.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-10 01:05 AM

Breathtaking and heartfelt
Peaches

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-11-10 02:37 AM

hey mister...those are melting words....

loved this

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2001-11-10 03:28 AM

Definitely words meant to be together...
see how they pour into the single tear.
*sigh*
Another great one Magnus!!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2001-11-10 12:45 PM

WOW....this is soul touched, and penned....lovely, lovely thoughts....
Greeneyes~

****

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-10-2001).]

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2001-11-10 12:47 PM

No stronger love exists than this.

Corinne

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2001-11-10 01:10 PM

Magnus,

So tender and heartfelt... just lovely

Hugs,
Tara

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-11-10 02:21 PM

*sigh* BREATHTAKING!!! *sigh*
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-11-10 02:26 PM

(big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) Oh Magnus, your loving heart has the most beautiful love a woman could ever ask for; faithfulness. Your beautiful heart will always be faithful to her, just as she will always love you! (sigh) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-11-10 03:14 PM

Karen....YES...a goddess....of the most
imaginable beauty...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-11-10 03:15 PM

Peaches...I am pleased that I can give you
words to read that are pleasurable to your
eyes and heart.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-11-10 03:17 PM

Sue...sorry for the puddles....glad you
enjoyed....thanx

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-11-10 03:18 PM

CT...very coincidental with the words pouring
into the tear...but appropriate...thanx..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-11-10 03:19 PM

Greeneyes...are they green? YES...soul
penned words can carry a lot of power..
easy to do when you truly feel them.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2001-11-10 03:20 PM

Thanx Corinne...pleased to please...I do
enjoy that.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-11-10 03:21 PM

Thanx Tara...I was in the zone...felt good.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2001-11-10 03:22 PM

Nancy....what is there left for me to say
to someone who comments so beautifully to my
every written word....Huh?

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-11-10 03:23 PM

Thanx Noah...she is a beautiful lady....and
BTW...I am the lucky one...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

19 posted 2001-11-10 06:26 PM

*sigh* a very lucky lady indeed. Romance seems to fill your heart and soul, my friend. This is beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

20 posted 2001-11-10 07:03 PM

Magnus; This is a little different in the way you write poetry, but it is so lovely, tender, and filled with compassion for the one you love. Beautiful work. Wanda

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

21 posted 2001-11-10 10:57 PM

What can I say. Beautiful thoughts, beautiful feelings. I hope she sees this.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

22 posted 2001-11-10 11:00 PM

This is very good. A heartfelt poem. Thank you for posting.

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