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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Revised even now contemplation of exercising my right to modify words of mine leaves me blinking ~ what audacity who should rewrite pain of yesterday or hope of tomorrow if the me of now refuses to think back on the what of then did I slip so easily from an old cocoon into new wings or fly so high that the sun singed all memory of how I got to where I am… perhaps it is just not worth it to revise the truths of yesterday to please those who would read it today |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
“to revise the truths of yesterday” What truths are there of yesterday That which came and past away, Even if you’d revise the word’s play There is nothing of truth left behind Except for that which dwells in mind And tainted revisions that today binds. Gloom |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sometimes I read back many years and relive a state of mind Some emotional thoughts from yesteryear that remain close, personal and unshared ~ I echo your feelings |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
If your present journey affords a better view, don't look back. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is not worth revising the words of yesterday for without them there would be no real you! However, it is important to look forward and write the words of the future for in them there is hope. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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