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Not to Worry
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Not to Worry |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Not to Worry I've loved, I'm sure, the way of you; anxious, sleepy, needing much, accepting little; rushed until you quite forgot how "You smell great" seemed momentarily to settle something deep. In you I've drifted back and forth, as though a pebble tossed into a pool disturbed. I thought to calm you. I have the gift. I would have shared this comfort in vulnerability. But you moved on, a stream of worry. RMW |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Some people just seem to flow on worrying.... God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You centered the eye of the storm for a moment...try again... well done! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert--a very sensitive portrayal of a relationship..well done, as your poetry always is. PS...nice to see you posting again!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, good to see you back here, I like the way this unfolded on the page.... [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-10-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* some of us are just worry warts. mmmmm I used to be one of those but I am learning to not sweat the little things. Well done. I enjoyed this poem. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Familliar and dear... lovely, Robere ~Tier |
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