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Open Poetry #16

they who watch

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2001-11-09 03:48 PM

they who watch

Why did it open
The kitchen door
I did not move
Yet it opened

What made it move
Catch my attention
Feel a familar presence
Who opened it?

They surround us
Longing to speak
Watching over us
And are inarticulate

Arthur

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-11-09 03:57 PM

OH YES!....

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-11-09 03:57 PM

angels???

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-11-09 04:03 PM

Arthur~Enjoyed this one, I did!
If you don't have a cat then it must be spirits.

Hopefully the good kind.

~Hugs across the pond, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-09 04:27 PM

(smiles) Oooohhhhhh...such a spooky but wonderful poem, dearest Arthur! Oh wait, it is just the creaking in the floors! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-11-09 04:51 PM

I liked this poem.Good job.
Peaches

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-11-09 10:40 PM

now, don't let my imagination run wild, will you..

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-09 10:55 PM

So very true, arthur. They are everywhere. Nice write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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