Open Poetry #16 |
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The Most Perfect Poem I've Ever Written |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston ![]() |
SIGH 'nuff said |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
i know the feeling keep a bit of paper and a pen by you the best ones comes at the strangest times arthur |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Lucie, I know just how you feel, but you always write so beautifully to us all, and you will find the most beautiful, incredible thoughts coming to you at the most unique times! (smiles) We all love you, sweet Lucie! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Gosh, this is my favorite ![]() ![]() Kathleen |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Work on it...LOL.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well....it needs a little something...but, boy do I know this feeling!! ![]() ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
The meter and rhyme are exceptional ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know...could the H be bigger? You know...indicating a heavy sigh? |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Exactly what I needed.. the hidden humor of poets.. and I do mean hidden.. giggle Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what a teaser to get my attention! this cracks me up..thank you ![]() |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
ROFLMAO. Perfect...what more can I possibly say???? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO... SUBLIME SENSUAL CAPTIVATING |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Lucie, with one sigh, did all the other words go by? Rick |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Rick, i enjoyed your witty reply.. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
SO REAL (surreal) |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lucie, Such inspiration! ![]() |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn...I thought I was brief. I bow humbly before your perfection in expressing a thousand different thoughts, emotions and memories with one word. And at the same time saying nothing tangible at all. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I can really read between the line in this Lucie! Very deep! Very drawn. Very....out of breath....LOL! Witty! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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