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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston

0 posted 2001-11-09 11:37 AM


How can I tell you they confided,
Early March has been decided.
I shake my head, how can it be,
Thats when they'll send you home to me.

Through Thanksgiving, and then through Christmas.
My Love how much your going to miss us.
New Years Day will come and go,
I won't celebrate without you though.

I'll make appearance for the children.
Smile and open presents with them.
But my thoughts will be just of you.
I know you'll be thinking of me too.

More holidays I'll spend alone.
Can't even call you on the phone.
They'll hold you there and waste the time.
These months of you I claim as mine.

It must be conspiricy,
The devil keeps you 'way from me.
I beg of you, don't let death take you.
give them these days, save me a few.

If just a day, a moments time.
To let you know I'm glad your mine.
It won't be long, hold on my love.
Please wait to join the Lord above.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

1 posted 2001-11-09 11:39 AM


This was a good read!!!!!!!
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2001-11-09 11:40 AM


o yuh safety is the idea! Nice poem I liked it alot yuh yuh
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2001-11-09 11:42 AM


Lucie such a tender and gentle write of emotions and love.  Beautiful dear poetess.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-11-09 12:07 PM


Amen

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