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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-09 08:27 AM




Angel
By: Noah Eaton
11/9/01

I sweep you off your feet
You pick me up
Queen of hearts
My one true love
You hold me close
I look deep into your face
I am sorry
That I couldn’t leave without a trace…

It’s gloomy here, I can’t stop crying
I need to hear your lips speak…

When you’re not here, I collapse to my knees
Wrap your arms around me, have faith in me…

Am I just a strange sad soul
Without a halo hanging above me?
I need you close to my heart
My sweet angel…

I’m in my bell tower
Signaling to you
But I am just a recluse
In life’s church to you
Sequined in tears
My heart can’t express
Whimpering softly
In my silent unrest

What’s that you say in my dreams?
Was it an omen, or just my instincts?

When you’re not here, I have nothing to share
Yearning for heaven to be my eternal wear

Am I just a strange sad soul
Without a halo hanging above me?
I need you close to my heart
My sweet angel…
My angel…


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1 posted 2001-11-09 08:32 AM


When you’re not here, I have nothing to share
Yearning for heaven to be my eternal wear

Written from your beautiful heart Noah.......I loved this line.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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2 posted 2001-11-09 09:05 AM


there are no strange souls, Noah!  Now, I should know, I'm stranger than most   This is beautiful.

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-11-09 09:22 AM


Heartfelt write, Noah.  Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2001-11-09 10:28 AM


This is a beautiful poem, Mistletoe Angle. I love it.
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