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Open Poetry #16

No Distance, Space, Or Time

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-11-09 08:10 AM

His, a heart of purest gold
he so young, but wisdom of old,
strength and fire burn deep within
his life tells a tale of where he's been.

Born to roam under wide open skies
a twinkle seen in deep blue eyes
laughter is heard in the air
no escape from his loving stare.

His lips so sweet, soft and warm
in his arms I'm safe from harm
his love I feel from his heart
even when we are so far apart.

There is no distance, space or time
when thoughts are held, so sublime
his love completes me, makes me whole
I carry him with me, in my soul.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-11-09 08:14 AM

Very nicely done,
In your soul is one of the nicest places
to be carried.
I'm sure he's smiling at you from where
he's now.

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-11-09 08:34 AM

Thank you Prof. so very much, I am grateful for those kind words from you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-11-09 08:42 AM

There is no distance, space or time
when thoughts are held, so sublime
his love completes me, makes me whole
I carry him with me, in my soul.
====================================

well it doesnt get much better than this..
unless of course we can shorten the distance

very lovely cadence kissed poem of sincerety and devotion.
well done gentle poetess

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-11-09 09:38 AM

What better place could he rest

Beautiful, m'lady, beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2001-11-09 10:20 AM

This is such a beautiful poem. I love it. Thank you for sharing it.

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