Open Poetry #16 |
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Open The Door To Love |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
Open The Door Of Love Open to me a new world Show me all that is truth Give me understanding Put my feet on the path Show me the direction Give me the gift I dream Put your arms around me Open your heart to me Give me your tenderness Put your lips on to mine Open your arms to me Show me what you now feel Put passion in your words Open the door of love Show me the way to you Give me time to love you Karen Torbiak 2001 Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Karen, this is sucha touching and beautiful poem of true love! (sigh) May the door of your heart open and unfold with such sweet love! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I haven't had this much enjoyment from anyplace in a long time. What a day!!! Good thing I didn't have to go anywhere. The poetry is flying through the roof with passion, laughter, joy and a few tears.... love this! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Your web is full of honey I'm sure you'll catch a bunny. *L* |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I started to say something clever until I read Seymour's reply. LOL, what a sweetie! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Karen! ![]() Sy...they're watchin us... be careful! ![]() ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Lady Karen, your love quite obviously knows no bounds, wonderful words and sentiments, so happy to see you writing poetry once again, Sir Robert
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very lovely heartfelt plea, Startime. Nice work! ![]() All writing comes |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You deserve all the wonderful things that this world has to offer and I know that special guy will love you more than life itself and worship you like the queen that you are. (Hugs) Love, RP |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good, Startime. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, Karen. Sandra |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Startime, you always have the right words.. ![]() |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
What a feeling it is to be so free with one being free with you...open to all things inside and out...That is how love grows. Very beautiful Karen! Sincerely, Regina |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful poem. |
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