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Startime
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0 posted 2001-11-08 08:08 PM


Open The Door Of Love

Open to me a new world
Show me all that is truth
Give me understanding
Put my feet on the path

Show me the direction
Give me the gift I dream
Put your arms around me
Open your heart to me

Give me your tenderness
Put your lips on to mine
Open your arms to me
Show me what you now feel

Put passion in your words
Open the door of love
Show me the way to you
Give me time to love you

Karen Torbiak 2001

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-11-08 08:14 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Karen, this is sucha  touching and beautiful poem of true love! (sigh) May the door of your heart open and unfold with such sweet love! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

The Lady of Shallot
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2 posted 2001-11-08 08:38 PM


I haven't had this much enjoyment from anyplace in a long time. What a day!!!
Good thing I didn't have to go anywhere. The poetry is flying through the roof with passion, laughter, joy and a few tears....

love this!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-11-08 08:47 PM


Startime,
Your web is full of honey
I'm sure you'll catch a bunny.
*L*

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Gaia
4 posted 2001-11-08 08:50 PM


I started to say something clever until I read Seymour's reply. LOL, what a sweetie!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-11-08 08:55 PM


Good one Karen!  
Sy...they're watchin us...
be careful!   LOL...
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Robert William Gruhn
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6 posted 2001-11-08 08:55 PM


Lady Karen, your love quite obviously knows no bounds, wonderful words and sentiments, so happy to see you writing poetry once again, Sir Robert


Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-11-08 09:35 PM


Very lovely heartfelt plea, Startime.  Nice work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 2001-11-08 10:02 PM


You deserve all the wonderful things that this world has to offer and I know that special guy will love you more than life itself and worship you like the queen that you are. (Hugs)

Love,
RP

SmartChick
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9 posted 2001-11-08 10:04 PM


Very good, Startime.
catalinamoon
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10 posted 2001-11-08 10:28 PM


Very lovely, Karen.
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-11-08 10:32 PM


Ah, Startime, you always have the right words..
rwood
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12 posted 2001-11-09 06:34 PM


What a feeling it is to be so free with one being free with you...open to all things inside and out...That is how love grows. Very beautiful Karen!

Sincerely,
Regina

walker
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13 posted 2001-11-09 06:51 PM


Beautiful poem.
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