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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-11-08 07:42 PM


And Interloper thought he knew
described some women quite a few
He squeezed and tickled no result
cause women are from different culte
But that he still won't understand
though his words were truly ment
A poet fine he is for sure
Yet for him there is no cure
So any woman here at Passion
will be described in 'lopers fashion
When you will be at age, thus old
rather wrinkled, bend and slightly bold
Maybe then you will come to understand
You'll never know what's on a woman's mind my friend


  



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-09-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-08 07:51 PM


*giggling* How true it is. BRAVO!!! But that won't stop him from trying and that is what we love so much about him.  Very well done, Titia.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-11-08 07:56 PM


Titia~
LOL ... my friend -
Well, I thought he 'squeezed and tickled' pretty good~

Shucks ANY man could live to be as old as Methuselah
and NEVER understand 'what's in a woman's mind'
That's part of our mystique !
Love ya', gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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The Lady of Shallot
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3 posted 2001-11-08 08:16 PM


no he won't but he seems like a nice fellow   He sure gives us a lot of attention!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-11-08 08:20 PM


You go, Titia!  That's it, I've decided...I'm on Titia's side.  I rarely truly 'laugh out loud' but this did it.
Do you crack your sheep up as often as you do me?

Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-11-08 08:25 PM


Titia!  This is too funny and looks good on that 'loper fella'!!
Funny stuff!  Enjoyed. ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-11-08 08:29 PM


Titia,
A wonderful reply. *L*

Balladeer
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7 posted 2001-11-08 10:36 PM


Titia, you are a priceless lady. God bless you  


duncan...you are certifiable! Love it!  

rwood
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8 posted 2001-11-08 10:40 PM


~Laugh~ You are so great! He is quite the Man...but you are The Woman! I loved this Titia!

Sincerely,
Regina

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Except for what's in the heart.
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SmartChick
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9 posted 2001-11-08 11:17 PM


This is very true. A man never knows what's on a woman mind.
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