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| Open Poetry #16 |
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Halfway Up The Mountain |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 The rumble below caused me pause gazing down in awesome wonder Halfway up the mountain, Lord still I hear the rolling thunder Cataclysmic calamity crashing all around Halfway up the mountain stopped in track of sound Clashing flash brings fear cascading yet above me angels soar Taking souls to the top of the mountain where they will live forevermore Halfway up the mountain, Lord stuck in-between anger and grief Halfway up the mountain searching for solace and relief Eternal life beyond the earthly shell of me I want to walk the golden streets of God's promises yet to be Have Gabriel sound the trumpet ! Let us gather 'round Halfway up the mountain, Lord I am Heaven bound~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is lovely! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Single word here Marge... B e a u t i f u l ! jwesley |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a gorgeous poem, and picture to match. Halfway up the mountain may be a safer spot with a better view than in the valley below. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with Kacy...the view would be spectacular half way up the mountain! Enjoyed this Marge, as I do everything you pen. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like to believe that he has prepared a place for me...forevermore...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I hope to be there too...halfway up a mountain to a treasured stop. Tis a beautiful poem. Much enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You have just written half a gospel piece  Put it to music and you've got it made! Wonderful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--It would make a beautiful song..I can hear it...gonna go play it now on the piano. Can you sing? Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Thank you for such nice smiles always~ JWesley~ Awwww, thanks~ MidniteSun~ Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed it~ Enchantress~ Such a nice reply ... thank you~ JamesMichael~ I'm SURE of it~ Thanks~ Magnus~ I think there is a special door for poets~ See ya' in line~  InterLoper~ Oh .. you're such wonderful encouragement. Thank you so much~ Martie~ I CAN sing ! ! And I know the cutest guitar man to join us~ Let's take this show on the road~  *You are all so kind to me ... I thank you from the heart of my little bottom~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautifully written verses, Marge! These are very moving...and, yeah, hmmm...I know a cute little guitar man, too! I'll be the groupie!  Very touching piece, m'friend! sp  And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, i never can figure out if i'm half way up or half way down but i think i'm standing right next to you great writing, ms Poet! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! Good expression of a walk of faith! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I'm sure you will make it. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yes you are, and your lovely spirit always sings with beauty and His voice will have you hiking all the way! (smiles) Such a beautiful poem of hope and faith! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Marge, it's your talent that's mountaneous....and I'm only half-way up |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Now this is a place we'd all love to be!! Great write, Marge. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Tee-Hee ! Now we've got the singer, the pianist, two guitar players and a groupie~ Let's do it to it~ Doreen~ Mountain ? What mountain ? Hello ... oh, I see you ~ Thanks, gal~ Denise~ Thank you. It's a walk I can highly recommend~ Seymour~ Thank you, my friend~ Noah~ Thanks for the read and reply~ Balladeer~ You 'grin' me every time~ LoneWolf~ I appreciate knowing you enjoyed it, hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ you have such a fantastic way of leaving peace for all to read in your words, I take comfort in this and thank you..... Lauren |
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