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beowulf_26
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0 posted 2001-11-08 12:31 PM


I've been robbed of my song,
leeched of my spirit.
I've lost sight of myself,
and fumble through each day.
I'm waiting for a miracle,
that I don't believe exists.

Time for bed.
I can't screw that up

Unrequited love sucks.

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2001-11-08 12:41 PM


LOL, spending a lot of time in bed lately?
Seriously though, hope the next day is brighter for you. Love that smiley face picture!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-08-2001).]

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-11-08 04:53 PM


Sometimes I do feel like I'm screwing up if I don't make it to bed before 2 or 3 am.  One am is alright but two is stretching it..James
Magnus
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3 posted 2001-11-08 05:42 PM


haven't we all felt this way from time to
time....well said...robbed of your song?
I like that...good expression.

Aimster
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4 posted 2001-11-08 08:35 PM


i related to this poem
very much...you have a beautiful
way of expressing deep emotions.
thank you for posting this.
take care.
amy  

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-11-08 08:39 PM




(sad sigh) Oh Torger, my heart goes out to you! (sigh) We all yearn for this moment every now and then, and I believe deep down you will find it very soon! (sigh) My heart is with you, dearest friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Torger, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-11-08 09:41 PM


Don't give up, it will get better in time.  I know it doesn't seem like it now, but it will.  Good honest write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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