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In My Dreams As Day Awakes
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In My Dreams As Day Awakes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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You come to me in my dreams with passion in your eyes. My own yearning fills and stirs me as I sleep. The softest moan escapes my resting heart. Your contact touches my mind in the deepest of dreams. I see your shadow cast by moonlight upon a partition. Flowing effortlessly across the room, settling near. Your murmurs spur me in every way as I move. Captured in my dream, stay and give me pleasure. I see myself grasping you, kissing your yearning eyes. My fingers, anxious, glides smoothly over soft skin. I adjoin my lips to your own, your desire flows in me. We moan as one as my dream takes us this night. You are reclining before me, the soft light of moon radiant. A star’s shimmer casting back from your eyes to mine. I hold your smile in my hands, you kiss them. Your tongue caresses your lips as you thirst. My reality awaits me, I shudder that it will come soon. Memories of each kiss, touch, caress begging to stay. Keeping you there, I strain against awakening. Will I remember, will you be with me as day dawns? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is GORGEOUS....and exactly what I'm talking about! mmm, mmm, mmm, I particularly loved this: "I hold your smile in my hands, you kiss them. Your tongue caresses your lips as you thirst." Total sensuality...and if I keep reading poems about such sweet dreams? It just may cure my insomnia...(wish I could download them into my REM's library) simple sighs.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....if this will help your insomnia, I will give you a double dose... HAPPY you liked and enjoyed this dreamy write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, you KNOW I enjoyed this Magnus! Good write! Now I can go to sleep, perchance to dream. Hugs, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Most excellent depiction ... sensuous, tempting, lost in thought the whole way through. Great job Magnus!! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Great writing.you drewme right into your words.Now I can go to sleep and have sweet dreams. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* This is truly a poem to dream by. Absolutely magnificent. I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, thanx,,, I hope you had pleasant dreams that did not go poof on you last night... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx CT...from you...I am flattered...glad you enjoyed this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches...like the sandman...I like to sprinkle a little romance over eyes so that visions may come upon the reader as they go to sleep...thanx. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As I wish upon a star tonite... I hope for sensuality to arise. As I close my eyes from light I fall into dreams of warm sighs.. Thanx Karen....sweet dreams |
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