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Unfolding
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Unfolding |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Unfolding Like the softness of a well worn quilt, I am unfolding before you. Yesterday, emerging, coming to light with myself, each day a new dawn of growth. Today, I rise leaking out past hurt, trying to deplete myself of all things negative, wishing I could escape to you, unburden myself in the warmth of your arms, absorb your strength, occupy your mind, smother in kisses that always tone down my extremes, blending me in shades of your gray 'til Like the softness of a well worn quilt, I unfold unto you. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
smother in kisses that always tone down my extremes, Love those words...and the candlelit feel from beginning to end. Willie B |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Willie B. I love the candlelight thought myself. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oooohhhhh, this is sooooo beautiful, I love it! (smiles) May his love forever fold into your heart and unfold always with true loves song! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful, just wonderful. I loved it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I read this yesterday but found myself too awestruck to comment so I came back today to reply. The expression of the quilt unfolding sent me twisting into space, words which have been shared with someone very close that is no longer ..., as if you could read a corner of my mind, your words warmed and shined a loving light. A simply awesome piece, my heart is with you Maureen. I tend to enjoy the moments in life that form the patches on my quilt, there are many !!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah ...you can make a woman blush with all your sweet words..thank you and hugssss I... I am always happy to see your wonderfuls *s ctowen...I am sorry about your "no longer" and hope that this brought you a pleasure of a memory or two...I enjoyed your response hugs Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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