Open Poetry #16 |
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Truth of touch... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
In the silence of an autumn night a crescent moon appeared through the cold dark sky casting a multitude of shadows toward earthly grounds while he glanced at her laying in sleep beside him so innocent so pure... Her essence enticing a temptation he cannot ignore adoringly he collapsed into a deeper stare without a blink of an eyelash memorizing every detail of her form recalling the sensation of her quivering sighs and the words he longed to hear from only her until that moment when her lips did part and spoke the sacred words i love you... Slowly the morning sun began to rise as he took a deep breath and reflected upon that moment ago while the sun brilliantly shine's through the weave of lilac lace casting her silouhette in hues of gold unto the silk sheets of surrendering pose she is awakened to the truth of his touch and his love for her once more... *~coco~* ![]() [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful. Simply wonderful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a fantastic expression...one of my favorites...James |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
absolutely gorgeous.... this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) OH MY GOSH, OH MY...THIS BEAUTIFUL LOVE POEM MADE ME WEEP IN JOY, IT'S SO ROMANTIC!!! (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, your romantic heart shines in every word! This is the most romantic feeling a lover can ever feel! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You are such a romantic, sweet Coco! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Coco, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'm so glad to see you posting Coco, especially excellent offerings such as this ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Coco--So nice to see you..and this poem is a painting of love, in words. Hugs! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you Poetfriend Sunshine, James, Awc, Mistletoe, Interloper and Martie for your most kind reponse to this poem and hugs2uAlways from my heart2your's... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco. . . you do not know how much I miss reading your words. . . they are so soft and tender. . . wonderfully done. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetieSven, your comments brought out a big smile in me just now... Muaah on cheeks2uDearPoetFriendSven *~coco~* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Slowly the morning sun began to rise as he took a deep breath and reflected upon that moment ago while the sun brilliantly shine's through the weave of lilac lace casting her silouhette in hues of gold unto the silk sheets of surrendering pose she is awakened to the truth of his touch and his love for her once more... ================================= Well whatta ya know...for a change its me on the back pages ![]() Im trying to play catch up here...which now seems impossible in these much too fast moving pages...but Im so glad I didnt miss this...its lovely Coco...such soft romantic thoughts and wonderful imagery..written with your signature style. Its sooooo good to see you posting poetry again. ![]() peace and poetry sweet friend ![]() You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
l can do is sigh... Sandra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JANET, you're sooooo sweet and I thank you bunches for peaking at this poem I share with you here... SANDRA, your sigh says it all2me sweetie and4that my dear I send you hugsNsmiles cuz a heart that sighs is a heart filled with much luv... Muaah on cheeks2u2dearFriends... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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