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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2001-11-07 05:07 PM


I need you like the flowers
Who rely upon the rain
I need you like good medicine
To take away my pain

I need you like the clouds
To shelter me from the sun
I need you to be here
When my heart becomes undone

In your presence I feel so radiant
As my face begins to glow
How I bloom within your radius
And my love continues to grow

With you here by my side
There'll be nothing for me to fear
You'll always remain a part of me
Whether you're far or near

I rest my head upon your shoulder
And gaze into your eyes of blue
How warm and oh so tender
Are these feelings I have for you

You put your arms around me
As we search the skies above
How wonderful it is
To be surrounded by your love

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-07 05:16 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) You need him, and he wants you forever! (sigh) May his sweet love forever shine in your loving heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!'

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-11-07 05:27 PM


Always nice to find someone we feel comfortable with...James
Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-11-07 07:23 PM


This is lovely! It would make a GREAT Valentine!  
The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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4 posted 2001-11-07 07:57 PM


THIS one melted my heart and brought a beautiful memory to mind. Thank you for sharing this one.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-07 08:21 PM


Isn't it wonderful what love does for us. This is a wonderful poem that put a smile on my face. Absolutely beautiful.    

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tiersdin
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east coast
6 posted 2001-11-07 08:27 PM


Oh so romantic, Sue...

beautiful!

~Tier

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