Open Poetry #16 |
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Love Prevailing |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Another day filled with tears sadness endured through the years. Dark clouds hanging overhead the coming morn faced with dread. Sun seeming quite brighter today beautiful rainbows lighting the way. Clouds breaking, skies turned blue Love prevailing, shared by two. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Liked the suddenness in which the mood changed... contrasting feelings are great... particularly if the second part is such a beauty... prevailing, yes indeed... Regards, sudhir |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Funny how a new day can bring so much change... well done, GentleSpirit |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
YES! That's what I am talking about! 1derful! Love DOES prevail sooner or later ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Isn't it so lovely how love can make everything so heavenly and harmonic? (smiles) Such beauty always floods your words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
faith of the heart....lovely thoughts Donna~ always~ Lauren~ I keep my ideals, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May love always prevail. ![]() All writing comes |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've lived long enough in the first verse and want my turn (forever *S*) in the second! *S* I like this very much, GS... well done! |
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