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NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

0 posted 2001-09-25 09:20 AM

I look outside
and I see rain
the wonderful rain
coming from heaven
It pours, it stops
it pours again
and I hear it saying
my name
calling me..
telling me that there
is nothing I should be sad
for, or mad for, for today
the rains crying for me
Heavens drops are dripping
down upon earth
the wonderful water
splattering all around me
filling me with
happiness to have a
good day.
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Inspired by my mood.. and the rain that is falling down in Jersey today... oh, the wonderful soothing rain..

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 2001-09-25 09:22 AM

Let it wash away your sorrows and make your happiness clean...Beautiful imagery here.

DreamRomancer
Junior Member

since 2001-09-18

Posts 46
Ohio, United States

2 posted 2001-09-25 09:53 AM

Rain cleanses the earth and soul of everything bad. May it continue to cleanse your beautiful soul. Good write!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

3 posted 2001-09-25 09:56 AM

Thank you both.. very much. *smiles* Glad you enjoyed

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-09-25 10:15 AM

I like this. This is very good.

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

5 posted 2001-09-25 01:30 PM

It pours, it stops
it pours again
and I hear it saying
my name
calling me..

you can almost here the rain in the words here...

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-25 03:33 PM

Said as gently as an autumn rain....lovely.

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

7 posted 2001-09-25 04:56 PM

Thank you all! Im glad you took time to check the poem out.. I was inspired by the soothing rain.. it is a wonderful thing to write about.. hehe..

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-09-25 06:24 PM

September rain. . . always makes me wonder. . .

great job here. . .

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