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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-07 12:54 PM




Lucie’s fantasy
the one she doesn’t publish
I will bring to light
~*~
she is a prodder
it comes from her cowpoke days
she is a cowgirl
~*~
she will not ride drag
either flank or in the lead
she controls critters
~*~
she does it so well
pen like a bullwhip lashing
used with smile and style
~*~
we met on round up
roping and branding mav’ricks
we worked until dark
~*~
ate beans and hardtack
and strolled the estacado
the moon was so bright
~*~
close enough to touch
glowing softly on the range
highlighting her hair
~*~
we started to kiss
she removed her redman chaw
spit and wiped her mouth
~*~
I lost my desire
Never could stand tobacco
We walked back to camp

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2001-11-07 01:08 PM


Yuck...way to ruin the moment, Luc!  This is too funny, Interloper.  Enjoyed.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-11-07 01:11 PM


Good one Interloper!  Enjoyed... ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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3 posted 2001-11-07 01:52 PM


LMAO!!  Enjoyed it Interloper.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2001-11-07 02:25 PM


LOL, this is toooo funny. Lucie, how could you? She really does rope'em in well with her lasso.
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5 posted 2001-11-07 02:29 PM



Well, at least she didn't try to hide from you her worst features...

Interloper
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6 posted 2001-11-07 03:54 PM


Duncan ~
Yeah, kinda made me look forward to huggin' my cayoose

Enchantress ~
I'm glad you enjoyed the finale

Gentle Spirit ~
Want me to help you look for it.  Maybe lasso it and brand it so's you won't have to worry about rump rustlers

Midnitesun ~
Yeah, she can twirl a rope awright.  I fully expect her to come out with her guns smokin' in the not too distant future

Lady ~
Lucie hides nuthn' frum nobuddy

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