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0 posted 2001-11-07 08:29 AM




Beneath their silver
Great treasures are still found in
Golden memories


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-07 08:33 AM


Absolutely stunning. A beautiful dedication to her and fits her perfectly. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-07 08:35 AM


ooooooh, nice. verrrrry nice. it seems that so very few understand that the haiku is, in fact, 5-7-5... not 7-8-6, not 4-6-5, not any combination thereof, but 5-7-5. and it's SOOO nice to see one written not only in proper form, but wonderfully. thank you. this was like a drink of fresh water to my spirit.
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3 posted 2001-11-07 08:36 AM



Memories in gold,
Treasuring those moments gone,
Thoughts never grown old.
Great treasures are still found in
The spirit of her called friend.


I agree Mysteria's a special Lady

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4 posted 2001-11-07 08:36 AM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is sooooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) Sharon will love this always, for her loving heart shines as do your beautiful words! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunshine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-11-07 08:39 AM


Karilea, This is beautiful and Sharon will be so pleased.  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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6 posted 2001-11-07 02:48 PM


Sunshine...She is special, as is this poem, and you!
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7 posted 2001-11-07 03:08 PM


Hmmmmm. A Senryu.  Sunshine.  Mysteria.  Beautiful image.  Fabulous write.  

What do these all have in common?  I am partial to them all

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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8 posted 2001-11-07 03:17 PM


You say so much with so few words.
A loving tribute to a loving lady.
From another loving lady.

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9 posted 2001-11-07 03:47 PM


Sunshine you do me honor!  Thank you, and you know as I have told you that they give soo much, if only people will listen.  From my heart I thank you for this, and I shall read this to them.  (hugs)

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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