Open Poetry #16 |
Passages - dedicated to Mysteria |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beneath their silver Great treasures are still found in Golden memories |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely stunning. A beautiful dedication to her and fits her perfectly. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
ooooooh, nice. verrrrry nice. it seems that so very few understand that the haiku is, in fact, 5-7-5... not 7-8-6, not 4-6-5, not any combination thereof, but 5-7-5. and it's SOOO nice to see one written not only in proper form, but wonderfully. thank you. this was like a drink of fresh water to my spirit. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Memories in gold, Treasuring those moments gone, Thoughts never grown old. Great treasures are still found in The spirit of her called friend. I agree Mysteria's a special Lady Gloom |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is sooooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) Sharon will love this always, for her loving heart shines as do your beautiful words! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunshine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, This is beautiful and Sharon will be so pleased. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine...She is special, as is this poem, and you! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmm. A Senryu. Sunshine. Mysteria. Beautiful image. Fabulous write. What do these all have in common? I am partial to them all Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You say so much with so few words. A loving tribute to a loving lady. From another loving lady. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine you do me honor! Thank you, and you know as I have told you that they give soo much, if only people will listen. From my heart I thank you for this, and I shall read this to them. (hugs) ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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