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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-11-07 04:54 AM


Patiently Pondering

I question  and query
Scrutinize the unspoken
Keep my distance
When I’m heartbroken

I question and query
On the signals of doubt
Activating emotions
Where tears tumble out

I question and query
A thinker I’ll always be
I focus my attention
Forever I question me

I question and query
A mind to understand
Inspiration if gained
With  insight to expand

I question and query
Whats holds fascination
Creating the balance
Of a vivid imagination

I question and query
Taurean procrasinates
Patiently pondering
My charactaristic traits

I question and query
With thought and care
What of the future
Of that I am unaware

Hope ©2001

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2001-11-07 05:29 AM


Questioning and querying...that's what's keeping me from sleeping tonight, not to mention that I foolishly drank a cafe late at midnight.   And who knows what the future holds? I need to buy a crystal ball. Trouble is, I dont know how to use it yet because I haven't finished reading the Harry Potter series yet. Boy, I sure wish I had written that series!
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2 posted 2001-11-07 08:33 AM




(sigh) Oh Hope, I know this feeling ever so well too, I'm always anxious in what the future holds. I always dream of what my dream love will be like, what I can imagine years from now, and what my favorite actress, Jennifer Love Hewitt's next movie will be. (smiles) But I know deep down in the heart, doubt will be replaced by believing, and all our questions will be answered with love! (smiles) BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-07 08:35 AM


WOW!!!!This is perfect. How can we learn and grow if we do not question? BRAVO!!!Very well done, Hope.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-11-07 08:39 AM


HopeS,
To question and query is a great game, should last you a life time. Enjoyed

wornways
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5 posted 2001-11-07 08:40 AM


rhyme without reason?
HopeS
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6 posted 2001-11-07 09:04 AM


Thanks for the reply midnitesun
Yes my active mind  often
keeps me awake
Hope

HopeS
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7 posted 2001-11-07 09:05 AM


Thanks Noah , Yes I shall believe what
I see with my eyes , yet continue to dream
Hope

HopeS
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8 posted 2001-11-07 09:07 AM


thanks for your kind words in reply Karen
yes , we learm , grow and continue with hearts to  flow
Hope

HopeS
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9 posted 2001-11-07 09:08 AM


Thanks Seymour , yes a lifetime
and I am too old to change my ways now LOL
Hope

HopeS
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10 posted 2001-11-07 09:15 AM


Hi Wornways
Thanks for taking the time to read and reply
although I must say , I have plenty of rhymes and lots of reasons
Hope

wornways
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11 posted 2001-11-07 10:02 AM


rhyme without reason
joy without season
peace not needing point
life with loving joint
great words spoken brief
turned unmetered grief

...

HopeS
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12 posted 2001-11-07 10:21 AM


thanks wornways
Over here
the season is spring
heart  with peace and joy
I am able to sing
Hope

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