Open Poetry #16 |
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Patiently Pondering |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Patiently Pondering I question and query Scrutinize the unspoken Keep my distance When I’m heartbroken I question and query On the signals of doubt Activating emotions Where tears tumble out I question and query A thinker I’ll always be I focus my attention Forever I question me I question and query A mind to understand Inspiration if gained With insight to expand I question and query Whats holds fascination Creating the balance Of a vivid imagination I question and query Taurean procrasinates Patiently pondering My charactaristic traits I question and query With thought and care What of the future Of that I am unaware Hope ©2001 |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Questioning and querying...that's what's keeping me from sleeping tonight, not to mention that I foolishly drank a cafe late at midnight. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Hope, I know this feeling ever so well too, I'm always anxious in what the future holds. I always dream of what my dream love will be like, what I can imagine years from now, and what my favorite actress, Jennifer Love Hewitt's next movie will be. (smiles) But I know deep down in the heart, doubt will be replaced by believing, and all our questions will be answered with love! (smiles) BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!This is perfect. How can we learn and grow if we do not question? BRAVO!!!Very well done, Hope. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, To question and query is a great game, should last you a life time. Enjoyed |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
rhyme without reason? |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for the reply midnitesun Yes my active mind often keeps me awake Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Noah , Yes I shall believe what I see with my eyes , yet continue to dream Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks for your kind words in reply Karen yes , we learm , grow and continue with hearts to flow Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Seymour , yes a lifetime and I am too old to change my ways now LOL Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hi Wornways Thanks for taking the time to read and reply although I must say , I have plenty of rhymes and lots of reasons Hope |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
rhyme without reason joy without season peace not needing point life with loving joint great words spoken brief turned unmetered grief ... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks wornways Over here the season is spring heart with peace and joy I am able to sing Hope |
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