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Open Poetry #16

States of Mind

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2001-11-06 10:22 PM

Rain always pours if you pretend it
Sun, it shines for open hearts
A wound breeds war if you don’t mend it
A war is won before it starts
In every day there is a daydream
Nights are left for self-reflection
Things are never quite as they seem
Smile, for your own protection

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-06 10:26 PM

I like this Kevin. Some very deep thoughts here to ponder.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-11-06 10:28 PM

(big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! Yes, we can stop storms and create sunshine with the powers of love invested within! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-11-06 10:30 PM

Good read Kevin...you have me thinking

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-11-07 09:42 AM

philosophical musing..i like this line

"A wound breeds war if you don't mend it"

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2001-11-07 09:45 AM

Kevin~
a beautiful gem from your pen.
really enjoyed this read. you know
how to compact a lot in very little!

"In every day there is a daydream
Nights are left for self-reflection
Things are never quite as they seem
Smile, for your own protection"
awesome read~...take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-11-07 10:00 AM

Kevin~
Oh ... so very nicely done, my friend~
Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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