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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-09-25 08:52 AM

Welcome the Day

Eastern light broke forth amid
the trill of meadowlark
skies of blue meet blue
as horizon's green embarks
to greet the day entwined
to know the warmth therein
letting loose but for a moment
tho their hearts hold love within

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-09-25 09:03 AM

yes...you have again painted the images well... I hope for all the day broke with some warmth and love....

Nice work...

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

2 posted 2001-09-25 09:05 AM

This poem put a smile on my face.. as Im having a not so good day! Great poem and imagry Sunshine..

loved it a lot..

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

3 posted 2001-09-25 09:09 AM

and through an open window
across the shining land
we can see the meadow
and the ocean's sand
and people binding hearts
and standing hand in hand.

Beautiful...thank you for the sunrise.

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2001-09-25 09:12 AM

What a gentle read to start the day Karilea ~ Thank you... Bonnie

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2001-09-25 09:17 AM

Such peace..your poem imparts.. a tranqualizer for the mind.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

6 posted 2001-09-25 09:22 AM

Dear Sunshine, once again a wonderful read, it gave tranquil images and peace to my night. Thank you for the sharing.

Rick

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-09-25 10:16 AM

Very nice poem.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-09-25 12:07 PM

Karilea~

I heard the trill of meadowlark
rise across the dawn
It bathed me in poetic dew
to greet the break of dawn

It took my very breath away
to hear sweet nature sing
Then in glide across my path
I saw the song on wing

Thank you for the jubilation of inspire~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

9 posted 2001-09-25 12:09 PM

Very Nice O Yuh hmmmm...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-09-25 12:24 PM

Oh Sunshine! Yet another gently penned and beautiful image. Enjoyed!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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