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I stand unashamed...
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I stand unashamed... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I stand unashamed, unbowed and unafraid. Timeless I remain. A steely strength soft to the touch. Unbroken in a world that breaks so much. A free spirit in a land that boxes up dreams. A heart so full it bursts at the seams. Many crave my touch but I will have only one and true I will be 'til my last day is done. There is grace in my step strength in my stride, a smile on my lips and a fire in my eyes. I am both a taker and giver of pleasure. I have warmth and wisdom far beyond measure. Hold me if you like. Love me if you dare. Leave me if you must, but no one will compare. |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Excellent statement, Stacy. Certainly a good read, and I like the fiery tempo that I pulled out of the text. Great write! You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Oh ... I like this~ 'A free spirit in a land that boxes up dreams.' Tender, yet fiercely purposeful, emoting~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a very cool write... strong in spirit... so good to see your name here again TA  Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great job my friend. . . a wonderful declaration of who you are. . . again, it's nice to have you back. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Unbroken in a world that breaks so much. I loved this |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I very much enjoyed this, stand tall! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very powerful...excellent write! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Masked Intruder -- Thank you so much for your kind remarks. Marge -- Thanks a bunch. It's so good to be writing again. Janet Marie -- I like seeing my name here again too! Sven -- Thank you so much! I've missed getting responses from you. I had a wee bit of a dry spell, but I'm back again. RSEvans -- Thank you for reading. EagleOne -- Glad you enjoyed. Enchantress -- Thanks!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TENNESSEE ANGEL~ Well ... the LEAST I could do is get the name right ! ! ! I apologize -  Now ... let's try this again ~ Oh ... I like this even more the second read~ 'A free spirit in a land that boxes up dreams.' Tender, yet fiercely purposeful, emoting~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Strength reads perfectly on you. Quite well done. |
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