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Outside of You |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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My world is spinning mental confusion rocks and rolls. A whirlwind in motion checks I've balanced, minus you. Inclined in a decline of emotions spent. Rotates on an axis of characterization. Taking responsibility for and against every movement and it's momentum, and each magnetic moment, combining the elements. Small particles derived from within turning outwards into oblivion. Taking place in point of view assumes either of two possibilities a place of emphasis that claims no basis of direction decisions I stand to lose. Yet my interpretation, when captured in the right light passes neither here, nor closer to there. Tossed around, cut in the slack gaining speed, in retrospect. a whirlwind inside of me spins faraway, outside of you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Our interpretations can be so different all the time, but as long as w elove and follow our hearts, we will find the joys and the blessings that bring us all together! (smiles) You always write so beautifully, sweet friend, I love your talent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very interesting imagery here. Left me spinning a bit. Your whirlwind of thoughts are going in many different directions, yet I somehow feel you're in control of where they go ultimately. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Noah Eaton, you are so kind and I appreciate you taking the time. I try my best to stay on track, but those one way streets can be misleading. Do I really sound like I'm going in all different directions? Oh that is not good. This was more about where I've been and where I don't ever want to go again. Thank you for reading Midnitesun. |
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